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Thursday, June 22, 2017

Swimming

                                 Swimming 

Kia ora hello again I'm back to tell you how swimming was.From my perspective the last day was my favorite because...Wait wait wait first ill tell you about the first week.The first day we got there was amazing we started it the little pool I thought it was way too easy but I still needed to work on my back stroke.On friday we went into the deep pool   

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  1. AnonymousJune 30, 2017 at 10:27 AM

    Hello Sister

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  2. AnonymousAugust 25, 2017 at 12:12 PM

    Hi Chloe,
    My name is Mikaela and I'm a year 6 student at St. Bernadette's School. I like how you made the text easy to read and you had lots of detail. Maybe next time you could cheek your punctuation and make sure everything makes sense. Where did you go swimming ?

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