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Friday, November 25, 2016

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            We are learning to edit our work
         Anything in red has been improved.
                                        
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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 25, 2016 at 1:46 PM

    Bonjour Chloe, Hannah N Here!
    I love you writing Its amazing you have put so much Imagination into your writing Ka Pai but sadly I Didn't put any imagination into my writing because my writing is a recount.
    Also Chloe I think you done an awesome job at fixing up your story, I also like that you have added a whole new text.
    If you want to read my story just go to my blog ;D
    Au Revoir ( Bye in French ) :D

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  2. AnonymousNovember 30, 2016 at 10:17 AM

    Bonjour Chloe, Milan here
    I love your writing I could imagine the place. There were some mistake in the story you should of re read it. It was hard for me to read some words some of the words was spelt wrong. Like what Amelia said in my post "Re read it and then post it." ok. Any way the rest was good. Catch you later bye. :D

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  3. AnonymousDecember 13, 2016 at 10:53 AM

    Kia ora Chloe this is really cool and lots of information well done.

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  4. Lee-Anne WahoDecember 13, 2016 at 10:53 AM

    Kia ora Chloe.
    Is the title of this accurate? Is this work blogging or writing? I like how you can see your editing. This is such an important skill in writing. Well done.

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  5. AnonymousDecember 13, 2016 at 10:54 AM

    Hey Chloe, Hannah.O here!
    Great story it was so funny and amazing!
    I can't wait for the next one! (If it comes out :)
    Blog Ya Later!!

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  6. AnonymousDecember 13, 2016 at 10:59 AM

    Hey Chloe it's Summer
    I really like how I can tall that you have
    put a lot of time and work into this slide I
    really like the story it's very fun to read
    this is great your next step is to write I
    bit more I like how you did it part by part
    keep up the great work chloe. (blog you later)

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  7. UnknownFebruary 20, 2017 at 12:00 PM

    Hi Chloe my name is Maddy and I am from Kaniere School. I am wondering did you put the red color for capital letters. Good job.

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