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Thursday, June 2, 2016

The reach charity child canser???

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This blogpost is about a charity for kids who are fighting there lives with canser .The charity reach sands for all there names and there is only 4 not 5 kids.Also on may we had a wacky hair day and muftie day to help
 the kids.Our wonderful teacher Miss Waho has shaved half her hair to donate at palms mall and even though she was a bit scerd#nerves at the start she still did it she is a super star.The kids names are .....
Remeber Eddie Aailyah' charlottle' and harley??
Fun fact:Misswaho nece is Aailyah.

2 comments:

  1. Thanks for your kind words Chloe. I like how you have tried to include as much information as possible in your post. You used capital letters for most names so next time try to do that for all.

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  2. Hi Chloe im Jasmine I am having a look at your blog.
    I see ypu have put some efort into this post.
    Your next step: when you are finished have a read though and make sure it makes sence and you have put the capitals in the right places and capitals for names and places full stops at the end just remember.

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