The tea cup
Today we did a challenge that involved writing the exact amount of words given (100).Today the picture we wrote about was ...
I decided mine was going to be about giants living underground and one called billy chicken breath tried to escape.
Here my writing is:
Giant tea cup
Once upon a time 101 years ago there lived giants that walked upon the land.They lived underground for so long they started to get frustrated and fight till the it was dinner then they all sat down like nothing happened but one day billy chicken breath got so mad he tried to dig he got to the top half of the tea cup was out in sight but little did he know it was going to get STUCK oh no he started to panic more “let me out of here” until next time ...
I think this was really fun but it was very hard having to have an exact amount.
I would defiantly like to do this again maybe 200 words next time.
Overall I think I did alright next time I would like to have more words.
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