My before and after blog comments.
This week we have been learning how to write blog comments there are three keys greeting positive statement and Question or next step.
Before-
In this I needed a capital for I and it needs a comment.
After-
And in this one iv added way more and the 3 keys .
This has helped my writing by making more sense and better sounding.
Kia ora Chloe,
ReplyDeleteWOW I can definitely see a difference in your blog commenting! I like how you have reflected on what you needed to improve on in your first comment and also reflected on how you have improved in the second. Great thinking. Have you encouraged your whānau to leave comments on your blog? How does it feel when you get comments from people about your learning?
hay its summer I really like how you have done your comment in the after snapshot I really like it but next step is tell us more info so we get what it means.
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