Improving our writing.

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Hi.  It's just me again.  Up in the corner there is a link to the writing skills I'm going to tell you why we use this.We use it to improve with our writing here is my score. Ok bye for now thank you.

Next time I'm going to try and write faster.

Measurement area.

                              Measurement  area.

Today in maths we have been looking at measurement this is my measurement area say it was 4 by 5 it means 4 x 5 and add that and fill in that many spaces and you get the answer 20 right away.Any way up there is my screen shoot of my measurement thank you bye bye for now.

My before and after blog comments.

                         My before and after blog comments.

This week we have been learning how to write blog comments there are three keys greeting  positive statement and Question or next step.

Before-

In this I needed a capital for I and it needs a comment.

After-

And in this one iv added way more and the 3 keys .

This has helped my writing by making more sense and better sounding.

My monster

This is my monster/ZOMBIE

This my monster I draw ed his name is FRED.

I drew him because in literacy we read a book and it was about a girl getting in trouble and when she was angry she drew monsters eating the teachers and it came to life but they were friendly monsters but after that she though it was cool.That is why I did this monster.