Port hills fire

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Hello everyone its me again today im talking about what i'm learning in writing. I have been learning about different language features.

Today and for the past week we have been working on a recount that is called Port hills fire.

Today you will get to see what I have done and so here it is.

Port hills fire:

It was a beautiful wednesday morning I woke up to the smell of my dad making breakfast for me and my sister. Then I saw dad look out the window. I said “dad what are you looking at?{“ His reply was “the hills, they are  glowing and have smoke. I think it’s a fire.”

Dad walked over to the tv to watch the news.The first report that came up was called the port hills and he clicked on it.He called out to me.It was a fire.I rushed out of the bathroom where I was brushing my teeth. All I could say was oh no” those poor people.

On the tv I saw  firefighters risking their lives.I felt bad for everyone of them.The fire was like big black gust’s of smoke and a hot fire where we roast marshmallows.But it wasn't that at all.

We then woke up mum to tell her so we went in her room and she said oh no too.Mum hopped out of bed and went on her phone there were things on facebook and people praying for others lives luckily I have no friends or family up there.

The two fire’s were apart from each other by sevel killometers.It was spreading at a sped of 160m every day.The fire fighters were fighting it 17 hours each and every day.

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